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The story so far:
The
phone rings a couple of times more. This time Cyrus decides to
pick it up, assuming it could be some urgent call. He hits the
accept button but before he could even say “Hello”:
“Why
are you not picking my call?? It’s you who has done a
mistake. It’s you who has leaked the news about Jen and the
memory card and now you show me attitude and refuse to pick up my
calls! Tara. you are just impossible!!”
Beep..beep..beep…
the call gets cut. Cyrus stands there cogitating about what he has
just heard.
Agitated,
Shekhar decides to pick Roohi up from school.
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Chapter 20
Back
home with Roohi, all his attention is on the clock, anticipating
Tara’s return. After many unsuccessful calls to Tara, he calls his
friend to cancel their meeting. He can’t leave Roohi alone at home.
Shekhar
is fed up of Tara’s annoying behaviour. Every time they quarrel,
she either rants, or sulks and ignores him. He has to apologise
though he may not be wrong. This time, he knows Tara has crossed the
line. If she expects him to back off, she is in for a surprise.
Shekhar starts up and shuts down his laptop four times before
abandoning it. He finds it hard to concentrate. After pacing up and
down the balcony for half an hour he eventually manages to settle
down a bit and get down to some writing.
“She
pushed the door open, and saw him glaring at her. She should have
been afraid but she had no idea what awaited her. She ignored him and
went inside. He followed her into the kitchen, the best place for
what he wanted to do. She faced him when she turned to take out the
rice container. He blocked her path, she must have sensed something
because she moved back a few steps. Without any warning, he gripped
her delicate neck with his hands and started squeezing it.”
Shekhar stops to glance at the words on the screen and feels better. The words have nothing to do with the story he is writing, but everything to do with his state of mind. Not that he wants to throttle Tara, but he isn’t going to let her off very easily either. He leans back, resting his head on his interlaced fingers, visualising different scenarios of how he would make Tara realise that ambition doesn’t have to be at the cost of family, relationships and friendships.
He
has no idea how long he has been daydreaming when loud noises disrupt
his tranquility. He discovers Roohi engrossed in Doraemon.
He
switches off the television, “time for you to sleep.”
“It’s
only eight!”
Shekhar
wipes his glasses; the kid has chosen the worst day to rebel. “Never
mind what time it is, just go to bed.”
“I
want to talk to mom,”
Roohi
insists, “besides....”
Shekhar
remembers Roohi hasn’t had dinner.
“Dinner,
and then sleep,” he maintains his position.
He
checks out some utensils to see what Tara has cooked that morning. He
had managed lunch on rice, but Roohi needs a full meal.
“Lady’s
fingers!” he grimaces as he sees the content.
He
should have guessed, he hates lady’s fingers. After every fight,
lady’s fingers miraculously appear in the menu. He suspects Tara
has a special reserve of lady’s fingers saved for the occasion.
Roohi hates lady’s fingers too, but then, she hates every other
vegetable except spinach. Spinach has escaped her list of dislikes
thanks to Popeye.
A
curly-haired head bobs in through the space between him and the
utensil. “We should order pizza,”
Roohi
says, eyeing the lady’s fingers.
Shekhar
laughs at her comment, “sweetie, you and I
are both eating lady’s fingers today.”
Roohi
frowns at him, “but, we don’t like it.”
He
smiles at her attempt to persuade him by using ‘we’ instead of
‘I’. He shakes his head and gently pinches her chin, “still,
vegetables make us healthy and wise.”
Roohi
makes a face, and skips to the dining table. Shekhar warms the food,
and serves her.
After
about an hour or two, he comes to find Roohi still nibbling her food.
“What
are you doing?” Shekar asks in exasperation.
“Why
isn’t mom back?”
Roohi
asks him back with her mouth full.
“She
should have been back”, he thinks. “She must be partying with her
newfound puppy, Cyrus”. He didn’t like the way that guy gazed at
his wife nor did he relish Tara’s bringing Cyrus into their house.
Before
he can respond to Roohi, a gentle thud of the door informs him of
Tara’s arrival.
“Is
this the time to come home?” Shekhar starts his tirade. It isn’t
the first time Tara was late, but today is a different matter. “How
dare you not answer my call?”
Tara
takes off her sandals, keeps her purse on the table, then replies,
“not
in front Roohi. If you don’t care about our daughter, I do.”
“Oh,
yeah?” Shekhar says, but doesn’t argue further. Instead, he
checks on Roohi and finds her gulping down her food.
“Mom,
I’m going to be a princess,”
she
squeals.
“You’re
already a princess,”
Tara
beams at her.
Roohi
finishes her food, washes her hands, and scoots towards her mother.
“I need a-”
Shekhar
pulls her back, “you need your sleep, now. You can talk tomorrow
about whatever else you need.”
Ignoring
her protests, Shekhar hauls her to bed, and kisses her goodnight.
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Roohi
can’t sleep, she is waiting for her mom to kiss her goodnight. She
stares at the fluorescent star stickers on her ceiling.
“Eat,
you can fight better on a full stomach.”
Her
mom’s shrill voice penetrates the calm of Roohi’s room. This is
followed by more indistinguishable words.
She
wonders whether their volume would decrease if they knew she was
awake. Papa might get angry if he sees her awake. She lies on the bed
whispering about her day to teddy.
She
hears heavy footsteps coming to the door and feigns sleep. Her mom
comes in to kiss her goodnight. Roohi can hear her papa pacing
outside the door. Instead of her usual kiss and hair-caressing, mom
bestows a quick peck on her forehead. Before, she can make up her
mind to talk to mom, her mom is gone.
Roohi
leaps out of bed to rush after mom, but her papa’s voice halts her.
“Don’t act like you care about Roohi, you couldn’t pick her up
one day.”
Roohi
trudges back to her bed, ties a scarf around teddy’s ears and puts
her fingers in her ears to block out the angry voices, but they
manage to percolate through. She hates it when her parents fight.
“Is
that what is bothering you? That you had to pick up your own kid?”
“What
bothers me is that you’re too busy for your kid, but have time to
prance around with that young
boy.”
Roohi
doesn’t hear the rest of the quarrel. “Papa doesn’t want to
pick me up,” she whispers to teddy, “mom doesn’t have time for
me. I’ll always have time for you…..even when I have exams.”
Roohi
wipes away a single tear. She decides to tell them that she can go to
school and come back home by herself, whenever the school van gets
cancelled. She knows the way very well. Then, she notices the
princess sketch. Grandma could make her a tiara, she is never too
busy for Roohi. Grandpa would take her to school. Grandma and grandpa
never fight, and they love her. Tears start flowing from her eyes,
wetting teddy’s fur.
“It’s
too late to go to grandma’s,”
Roohi
thinks aloud. Then, she glances outside the window grills. It isn’t
very dark, the building compound is brightly lit up. She observes two
familiar figures talking on the ground below. If
she waited till morning, her parents wouldn’t let her go.
She
folds up one of her uniforms, and her favourite dress and stuffs them
into her backpack. Then she tries writing a letter....
“Dear
papa and mom,
You
wo
don’t
have to pick me up, I can manage on my own. g
Grandma
can make the tiara.”
It
doesn’t sound nice so she crumples up the paper.
“Dear
mom and papa,
I
don’t want to be Little Red Ridinghood. Grandma and g
Grandpa
don’t fight. They love me.”
She
crumples up this paper too. Then she thinks better of writing a
letter. If she doesn’t tell them, they won’t know where she is
and can’t bring her home.
“Get
out!”
Her
mom’s voice echoes through the room followed by the slamming of the
door.
Roohi
checks through the crack, and sees papa marching to his study
carrying a pillow.
Next
morning, Shekhar wakes up with a severe headache, the sofa creaks
every time he moves. He acts like nothing has happened. He does not
want to give Tara the pleasure of seeing him distressed. Tara’s
usual yelling for Roohi gets on his nerves. After a while, he hears
Tara scream for him, “Shekhu, Roohi-she’s gone.”
He
hurries towards Roohi’s room, but he is certain Roohi is hiding
somewhere. Her bed is strewn with crumpled bits of paper, Shekhar
picks them up and reads them. It doesn’t make sense to him. He also
finds a sketch of a dress Roohi has drawn. Panic wells up in his
throat. He searches the entire house, even under the beds but finds
no sign of Roohi.
He
overhears Tara on phone with her mom, “Has Roohi come there?”
“No,
it’s just that....”
He
dashes out of the door; his baby doll is wandering on the streets. He
has to find her.
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Thanks Rajesh. :) Yes, we are.
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Gosh! Hope he finds her soon.
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CHAPTER 20
ReplyDeleteA child’s feelings and emotions have been excellently flashed in a setting where the parents are not on terms and have their own priorities over family interests. Roohi’s disappearance as a fall out of an agonizing home front is a further suspense stretching the list keeping the readers on tenterhooks
Thanks a lot, Shridhar. I'm happy you liked it. Read the rest parts too.
DeleteWOW Dynamic weave writers. In the whole muddle - sad to know that Roohi has walked out of a secured zone. Big question where she is ? Tara's mom does not complete her sentence. Suspense building up Keep going
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A fine description of the trauma that a child goes through when the parents fight. Congratulations
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DeleteChildren suffer when adults fight. :(
Roohi is depicted well - I hv time for u even if I have exams - wonderful - interesting twists ...
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